Storytelling Unit - Week 2 Day 1

This day is consisted of expanding on current ideas based on what I wrote about in the blog post 'Week 1 Day 1' when speaking about the potential project brief. If you are unaware, here's a quick recap:

"-I've chosen thriller, something about the connection between thriller and meeting switches on a light in my head.
- Two uni brothers meet at an empty property looking to invest and get themselves onto the property ladder, so they have made an appointment with a local agency to set up a showing of the house
-when they get to the house, it is empty, the door is slightly open, after knocking for a certain amount of time, they enter the house
-inside the house's front room is a dead body with a sack over the head tied to a chair.
-one of the brothers immediately freaks out and checks for a pulse, when nothing comes back, the brother starts shaking the chair in hope that the person wakes up.
-the person drops a phone, with a play button on the screen
-a silhouette of a character tells the two boys 'sorry about this, just at the wrong place at the wrong time' followed by a random countdown, also police sirens are heard.
-unknown to the brothers at this point, fingerprints are all over the victim, but they leave anyway."

We are put into groups to therefore expand on the ideas and to help others, I think I gained a lot of information that I could used in my short.


-I think overall I need to formulate an ending that makes sense, after sharing the story with Simon, he said it was more of a setup rather than a full story, which makes sense.