Comissions Unit - Feedback from Rough Cut

After editing a rough video, I got into contact with Adrian to give me some feedback on the video. He loves the video but feels he needed to be tuned up a little bit as he was quiet. The main part is that he loved the video which personally I have fulfilled my aim. Anyway, more editing to do to satisfy the client just blogging to mention that there was initial feedback from the client and amendments were made.