Digital News - Personal Critique and Feedback From Helen

So heres our feedback from helen I recorded on my phone, there was a few things I that I did from this is that our branding and our characters don't match. Ren is too formal, so therefore there needs to be a few changes. We want our channel to represent the younger generation and be techy, but overall quite informal, the broadcast package will be adjusted to take more of the 30 second news where the anchor stands up and talks while a screenis behind them, I think that this will fit our channel perfectly, we can still use the broadcast package but remove the desk, as it gives the wrong look across. The troll package is yet to be filmed, so we'll see what we adjust in that department later