Fiction Adaptation - First Draft Script

Here is my first script! It feels a lot shorter than what I think it should be but it captures what I want to convey, a mentally unstable dude who is intelligent. The imagery on screen will help me convey my message perfectly, I will be doing a shot list to supplement this so it thickens out my vision. I have started to cast my team and actors for this film and what gear I will be using for this film. In terms of adapting the original media, I didn't include or add to the audio, so overall its a perfect translation of the poem. However, I did take the words at face value. Here is the script I hope you like it!